This is a pretty
solid whodunit in which Francis Pryor does bring the essence of the
Fens to the page.
However it often
felt in need of a stronger editorial hand, description of details
irrelevant to the plot were far too common. I don’t know if this is
related to the crowdfunding model of the publishing house but I feel
you could probably have cut the text by at least a third without
significantly impairing the narrative.
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