Saturday, 15 November 2014

Not tonight Neil by Ian Gregson

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This is a powerful coming of age story, and the account of the struggles of being an ordinary teenage boy are well pitched.

The bulk of the novel is effectively told by the teenage Dennis, and these part works really well.

However there is an additional layer in which the 42 year old Dennis, who has found fame as a cartoonist by publishing a “graphic novel” of his teenage life, is seeking some kind of closure on that chapter of his life.

This layer is far from successful.

Firstly, I guess the idea that anyone would find “fame” via this route is a stretch. And the contrast between the dramatic but deeply plausible tale about teenage Dennis and this clunky middle-aged narrative is uncomfortable.

Second, another contrast, the teenage tale is essentially claustrophobic, and that is its power, while the middle-aged tale is expansive and in being so is ultimately flat.

The frustration is that the middle-aged layer is not required – the teenage tale stands alone – and I feel Gregson would have benefited from Editor who would have cut this and left the novel stronger as a result.

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